It could use more of a bass line and stronger beats, but that's just my opinion.
However, you kinda screwed up the lyrics. "Sarubobo" is a compilation of "saru", the Japanese word for a monkey, and "bobo", an equivalent of "pussy." The word may have some meaning by itself, but I don't know much Japanese slang, so...
I'm not typically a person who holds onto remixes of songs, but this one took the cake! I have to give extra credit for using the melodies from songs most American fans don't know about.
Too bad the song cuts off at the bridge to the first melody...
If it didn't, I'd give you a 10.
Please make more of these!
i made it as a sample then i for got the song i mixed with it so i did not get to finsh it :(
Now this is REALLY suspicious...
I can tell this is a real orchestra, but I have a problem believing that an amateur arranged this. I know for a fact that this version hasn't been featured in any of the games (at least the ones I've played), but it's possible it was ripped from a live performance. I'm gonna have to check into it; I'm probably on Wade's block list by now.
I can't even tell if you just ripped this from the game and stuck it in the portal.
I have a hard time giving good scores to people who make suspicious entries like this; the last thing Newgrounds needs is trolls flooding the portal with stolen content, as WAY too many people have already gotten away with.
Too much bass.
Other than this, you were off to a good start. The bass line echoed too much and iot overshadowed everything else. I actually had to fight to appreciate the guitar part. Can you fix this problem?
...but everything else is sickening. When I think rock, I think REAL rock, not some 10-year-old's synth-based experimentation.
The drum part was your only saving grace from a 0.
The only thing that could've made it better would be if it were a loop or if it were a few minutes longer.
I still like it anyway. It makes me want to get up and dance.
You almost had me fooled.
There's no actual guitar music in this. Next time you try to pass something off as metal (and even name the instrument used), be sure you can substantiate it.
It would be unfathomably awesome if this were to come to pass.
Until then, you get a 0.
Needs more bass...
Overall, nice work.
What would you think if I sang it, mixed the sound and sent you the results?
that could be interesting :P
back then we didnt have vocalists :P
go for it!
thanks for the review!
Ding-ding-ding went the ring-ring-ring...
I'm the Sonic Electronic and I'm gonna be the king...
Aww shoot, I can't remember all the lyrics now, but nice recreation anyway.
hahaha I should recreate one with the lyrics
I love sonic electric lyrics :P
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